由于中英文语言及思维之间存在差异，多数作者提供的英文摘要存在中式英文现象，真正文法正确且符合科技期刊英文摘要要求的还不多。以我国水利类中文科技期刊的英文摘要为例，从词汇和句子结构2方面详细分析了摘要中存在的中式英文问题，将其归纳为词语搭配不当、词汇冗余、名词肿胀、缺少句子衔接、语序不当，以及滥用被动语态等问题，并给出相应的修改建议，供科技期刊作者及英文编辑工作者参考。
Abstract
Due to the differences in language and mindset between Chinese and English, Chinglish is often seen in the English abstract of Chinese scientific journals. With the English abstract in Chinese water conservancy journals as an example, we analyzed the features of Chinglish in terms of wording and sentence structure, and summarized the problems into improper collocation, lexical redundancy, lack of sentence connection, improper sentence order and misuse of passive voice. Furthermore we offer some improvement suggestions for writers and editors.
关键词
水利科技期刊 /
中式英语 /
英文摘要 /
冗余词汇 /
句型结构
Key words
scientific journal /
Chinglish /
English abstract /
redundant words /
sentence structure
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